Link to my second elevator pitch!
https://youtu.be/nY5XIn01Gtc
- After reading the feedback that I received I gained a new perspective on how to go about this second elevator pitch. Some things that I had never thought about were how my pitch never really changed, and how I did not make a lot of eye contact. These are all things that in the moment of recording my first elevator speech I thought I was focusing on but looking from other people's perspectives I was not.
What I changed based on my feedback:
- I focused a lot on this elevator speech my pitch when I am talking, I tried to focus on making it fluctuate with my emotions and my words that I was saying throughout my elevator speech. I also tried to engage in more eye contact while recording. I decided it might also help me improve this elevator speech if I stopped fidgeting and swaying in my video as I tend to do when public speaking. I believe that using my feedback to help me with this elevator speech helped me improve tremendously.
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